Peer Review 1

Peer Blog: http://ipass4zona.blogspot.com/2016/02/draft-of-project-1.html
Rubric & Score: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GlpCVLIRQtD2jsy4ttsozvN2soZcWi-mlF-j_ohu7oM/edit?usp=sharing

Neej Patel, "Neej Patel", CC0 Public Domain

For this assignment I review Neej Patel's blog post about the Obamacare controversy. After reading this draft I realized that my QRG was lacking in the information area. Neej's QRG had a large amount of information and was analyzed very well.
Two mistakes that Neej made was the lack of white space, which is an important QRG convention. The words were spaced very close together and there was little room around the paragraphs. The second mistake was the lack of explaination of the dates and some events concerned with the controversy. Two smart things Neej did was, one, he did an excellent job of describing the stakeholders in the controversy and, second, he used lots of information and did a great job of analyzing.