Peer review is an important step in the creation of a finished product. It allows for outsiders to make sure the person or group working on the project understand what they are doing and help them if they do not. Here is my review.
Title:
Open Post to Peer Reviewers
Author:
Marisa Kubacki
Review:
Hello Kubacki! I like how much emotion that you convey in this video. I think your personal experience really helps out your arguement and gives you credibility. A few suggestions. (1) you should try to add music and pictures you show some charts or pictures of metal illness. (2) Your counter argument in the middle of the video is way too long. I started questioning what your argument was. I think cutting this section down will greatly improve your video. Everything else seems fine.Good Luck on Project 3!
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